really badly done.
first of all, the first few categories in the menu, such as frame by frame and filters, are simply one short paragraph each with no examples, or attempt to even show where the options are in flash.
The "how to create a simple game" info, in one ridiculously long 0.01 font size line, shouldve been cut up into separate sections, so when you copy and paste it, you would actually know whether you got all the info or not, or better still, make it readable in the tutorial itself, on several pages. (i didnt even realise the info was there because the writing was so small, it just looked like a line).
and to screw things up even more, you forgot to put in the whole actionscript info section. I'm sorry, but that is just extremely poor, especially seeing as people who make tutorials should atleast know how to do things properly themselves. did you not even testplay the tutorial before you submitted it?
i think in your next tutorial you should simply ask someone else to to watch it before you submit it, rather than let a lot of other people on NG test it for you and write a whole unnecessarily bad review about it like i am doing now.
Go on, you can do better.